Unit 7

OUT: exit, removal, and exclusion
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7 · OUT: exit, removal, and exclusion

Cutting scope and letting people go.

ACCESS

Read the scene and notice the moves in bold. One of them, carve out, is never taught in this book. Before you read on, let the particle show you what it means.

A nonprofit, three weeks before the board approves next year's program budget.

Priya We're eleven percent over. Something has to come out.

Femi We could cut out the regional workshops. They're the biggest line after salaries.

Priya I'd rather not rule out the workshops yet. They're the only thing rural members get.

Ana Then we carve out a smaller version. Two regions instead of six.

Femi That still leaves out four regions, and they will notice.

Priya Better than the alternative. If we do nothing, the board shuts out the whole program.

ANALYSIS

ONE QUESTION RUNS THIS WHOLE UNIT

Who is doing the moving?

All three senses are one picture: something leaving an enclosure. What tells them apart is whether the thing left under its own power, somebody took it out, or a boundary was held against it. Ask this before you choose the verb.

The structure

Out is the mirror of in, and its hub is just as physical: away from an enclosure. Step out of a room. Take something out of a drawer. Every abstract sense in this unit is that one image applied to something you cannot literally walk out of.

The three senses differ only in who is doing the moving. In the exit sense, the thing leaves under its own power: people drop out, walk out, opt out. In the removal sense, someone takes it out: you cut out a line item, rule out an option. In the exclusion sense, the boundary is held against something that wanted in: a decision shuts people out, locks them out, freezes them out.

Exit

Sense
the thing leaves under its own power
How you know
the one that goes is the subject of the sentence
Use it to
report a departure nobody had to carry out
Two of the sites opted out before the pilot began.

Removal

Sense
somebody takes it out
How you know
there is an agent, and the thing removed is the object
Use it to
report a decision to take something away
We ruled out the third option on cost.

Exclusion

Sense
a boundary is held against something that wanted in
How you know
the thing is outside and would rather not be
Use it to
name a decision from the point of view of who it kept out
The new rule shuts out the smaller vendors.
OUT: away from an enclosure. Exit: drop out, opt out, walk out. Removal: cut out, rule out, leave out. Exclusion: lock out, shut out, freeze out. Thoroughness, Distribution, Visibility belong to Unit 8.

The literal sense sits at the top. Everything under it is that same movement applied to something you cannot touch.

Out of a room, out of a drawer, out of the group

The three senses are not three meanings of out. They are one meaning seen from three positions, and English marks the position with the grammar rather than with the particle.

In dropped out the leaver is the subject. In cut out the thing removed is the object and somebody else is the subject. In shuts out the subject is neither: it is the rule, the decision, the door.

So the sentence tells you the sense before the meaning does. If you can see who is subject and who is object, you can place an expression you have never met.

The test you can run with no book

Ask: did it leave, was it taken, or was it kept out?

Leave under its own power and the sense is exit. Taken by somebody and it is removal. Held outside against its will and it is exclusion.

This works on expressions the book never teaches. Carve out has an agent cutting a piece away and keeping it, so it is removal, and you knew that from the sentence shape before you knew the phrase.

The mechanical half: exclusion needs somebody who wanted in. Nobody is shut out of a thing they did not want. If the sentence has no one on the wrong side of the line, the sense is removal, not exclusion.

Watch out. Leave out and leave off are not the same. Leave out means you omitted something that belonged. Leave off means you stopped, as in pick up where we left off. You left off my name is wrong.
American / British English. Sort out: British speakers use it constantly for fixing almost anything, including people. American usage is narrower and leans toward sorting out a problem or a mess. This book uses the narrower American sense.

One idea covers them all: out means past the boundary, and the only question left is who moved. They walked out, you cut them out, or the door was held shut and they were shut out. That is one image with three agents, and choosing between them is a real decision, not a stylistic one.

Your prediction: carve out. You predicted this one from out before you read any of the unit: someone cuts a smaller piece away from a bigger one and keeps it. That is the removal sense, where an agent does the moving, and the particle is what told you.

ACTIVATION

Work down the page: the form first, then the strangers, then the particle choices, then the words, then say one out loud.

A

Complete the form

Use the verb in brackets plus out, in the correct form.

B

Spot and fix the error

Each sentence has one mistake. Rewrite it correctly.

This only looks for the correction. Compare with the key for the wording.

1. You left out my name on the distribution list.

2. Can you cut it out before the board sees the draft?

3. The committee ruled out the second option and kept the first.

4. Four regions were left out of the revised plan.

5. She opted out of the pilot in March.

C

Rewrite with a phrasal verb

Replace the formal verb with a verb plus out that carries the same meaning.

Model answers. Other wordings are right too.

1. We should cut out the regional workshops.

2. I don't want to rule out that option yet.

3. The revised plan leaves out four regions.

4. Two partners opted out before the deadline. (dropped out also works)

5. That decision shuts out everyone downstream.

D

Match the halves

Join each opening to the ending that completes it.

E

Meet a Stranger

These three are not taught anywhere in this book. Reason from the particle, then reveal the key.

1. “Two of the biggest donors quietly bowed out after the leadership change.”

2. “Finance wants us to strip out anything that isn't tied to a funded outcome.”

3. “He was iced out of the planning group within a month of raising it.”

bow out: to withdraw gracefully, on your own terms. Exit sense.

strip out: to remove something thoroughly, leaving only the essential structure. Removal sense.

ice out: to exclude someone gradually and without stating it. Exclusion sense.

F

Particle swap

Same verb, three particles, one right answer. Choose the particle the situation needs.

G

Vocabulary: cutting and excluding

Match each expression to its meaning.

H

Vocabulary in context

Complete each sentence with an expression from G.

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